Girl In A Tenement
(A work of some obscure, Ukrainian artist.) He followed the ancient rule of painting -- three or five objects create a good still-life, nothing more. So when he entered her room these things composed...
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oh, what a wonderful painting you've drawn, wendy!for rhythm:maybe?Muslin sheets surrounded her body; and bare space defined her nudity as light stretched through the doorway making candles a...
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that this poem is hypnotic...esp that ending with the name...mysterious...lovely.regardsedenfree E-bookNavel Orange
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I like it this way-making candles a detailpointless as her nameyou have a beautiful way of getting it said.dwww.dorothydmienko.com
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Dear Ray and DorothyThank you so much for reading this poem so carrefully. I think your insight and arrangment of lines and words is both interesting and lends a creative twist to this poem. I will...
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.good morning, Wendyobjectiveto subjectiveto moralwho can tell where one ends and the otherbegins ... more likely all three were presentsince the beginning.half light that comes to a bitter edge.well...
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Hi NeilThank you so much for reading and commenting on this piece. I deeply appreciate your kind words and insightful perspective. It helps to keep me focused.my bestWendy
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